Attempting to Make Up
Life in Seaddle
3 July 2014
Stats
The RP has a total of 16 lines, 512 words, and 2671 characters.The average line consists of 32.0 words that themselves average 4.22 characters taking about 4 minutes, 12 seconds.
Stoic said a total of 8 lines, 263 words, and 1332 characters.
Stoic's average line consists of 32.88 words that themselves average 4.06 characters taking about 1 minutes, 48 seconds.
Sweet Treat said a total of 8 lines, 249 words, and 1339 characters.
Sweet Treat's average line consists of 31.13 words that themselves average 4.38 characters taking about 6 minutes, 36 seconds.
22:12 Sweet_Treat is closing up her shake stand for the day. She was feeling quite lonely and occasionally her thoughts drifted back to that stallion whom she thought might be the one, but then he dumped her.
22:44 Stoic walks up slowly to the door of Sweets house, having not seen her in a while... mostly to let her calm down... he wanted to see she calmed down enough to were they could be friends
23:02 Sweet_Treat was currently on her way home from her place of work. The mare was hot and tired as she flew, but that didn't wipe her smile off her face.
23:05 Stoic waited at the door with a sigh, hating the fact that he was usure if she was ignoring him or simply not there to open the door to awnser his knocking
23:09 Sweet_Treat arrived above her house to see a familiar looking stallion waiting at her door. Instead of confronting him directly, she fluttered onto her balcony and called down. "Hello Stoic... Can I /help/ you?"
23:11 Stoic steps back and smiles up at her "Ah...um.. hey Sweet..." He looks away, awkward scraping his hoof against the ground "I was wondering... if we could... um... be friends..." You couldn't get any more direct with a mare
23:14 Sweet_Treat scrunches her nose and furrows her eyes at him. Are you sure you won't just switch to a /better / friend when the next one comes along? " She asks in a sour voice.
23:17 Stoic frowns to her "Look, I just want make up with you. I not sure I can be your stallion..." He smiled warmly "But nothing is going to stop me from being your friend... at least any actions outside your control"
23:19 Sweet_Treat turns her nose up at him with a hmph. "You havn't even given me a proper apology for the pain you caused me."
23:21 Stoic goes back to a frown as he looks up at her "Sweet... I said sorry dozens of times, even offering to be a friend or a cuddle buddy and what not... I don't know what else I could do"
23:24 Sweet_Treat crosses her hooves and looks down at him. "You said you were sorry to lose me, but never actually sorry for what you did, for willfully taking a match to my trust and happiness. You never apologize too me, only at me. "
23:25 Stoic nods and closed his eyes "I'm sorry, ok Sweet... I thought you'd known that by now for how hard I took having to tell you so..."
23:38 Sweet_Treat sighs and considers his apology for a couple seconds and then disappears, only to reappear a couple minutes later at the front door. "Alright... One more chance."
23:39 Stoic walks up and looks her over with a smile "Its good to see you again sweet..." He moves over to softly hug her "You deserve better then me..."
23:42 Sweet_Treat returns the hug weakly, obviously not as enthused about it as stoic was. "I'd say so. I deserve a stallion who is faithful to me."
23:43 Stoic breaks the hug with a frown "I know I deserve that... but we're adults, can't we put it behind us and at least be friends"