A Damaged Brain
Seaddle Afterdark
24 March 2014
Stats
The RP has a total of 67 lines, 2298 words, and 12683 characters.The average line consists of 34.3 words that themselves average 4.52 characters taking about 4 minutes, 46 seconds.
Gyro Tech said a total of 26 lines, 765 words, and 4242 characters.
Gyro Tech's average line consists of 29.42 words that themselves average 4.55 characters taking about 4 minutes, 3 seconds.
Inky said a total of 30 lines, 1088 words, and 6132 characters.
Inky's average line consists of 36.27 words that themselves average 4.64 characters taking about 6 minutes, 19 seconds.
Liten said a total of 11 lines, 445 words, and 2309 characters.
Liten's average line consists of 40.45 words that themselves average 4.19 characters taking about 2 minutes, 14 seconds.
17:09 Inky pushes GyroTech into a somewhat arbitrary position, then tackles him into Liten. "Hiiii!"
17:10 GyroTech crashes into the little breezie, the tiny pony getting lodged in some oriface.
17:14 Liten wiggles around in the nose of the stallion, unsure exactly why the meany would do such a thing
17:16 Inky starts to giggles as she sees where Liten is stuck, then bursts out laughing, being completely unhelpful.
17:18 GyroTech takes a deep breath in through his nose preparing to sneeze, drawing the breezie fully in. Her wiggling unfortunately puts her in a position where the following sneeze cant dislodge Liten. The unicorn is still slughtly stunned from what had happened.
17:18 GyroTech stares blankly at Inky.
17:20 Liten wiggles about, screaming out in fear as shes stuck in the stallions nose. She eventually wiggles herself free and starts climbing up to the brain
17:25 Inky bites her lip when Liten doesn't get sneezed out, frowning. "Um. GyroTech, where's Liten?"
17:27 GyroTech opens his mouth to speak only to start howling in pain and rollin around on the ground. He tries desperately to try and suck Liten out of hus nasal cavities, drawing plenty of mucous out and hopefully a breezie)
17:28 Liten the breezie fights to stay inside. This was her chance to get the stallion back for abusing everypony she knew. She dug her way quite painfully through the flesh of the stallion in order to reach his brain, causing blood to come out with the mucous.
17:32 Inky 's eyes widen as GyroTech starts rolling around in pain and bleeding from his nose. "Gyro! What's happening?" She leans closer and cocks her ears, trying to listen for anything the breezie says. "Liten, can you hear me? Are you okay? What's going on?" The bat pony rushes her words together with worry.
17:33 GyroTech tastes the metalic taste of blood in his mouth as he spits out the red mucous, still howling out in pain incoherently.
17:35 Liten doesn't speak to Inky, focusing on this one very importaint task he assined herself and she was going to do it... even if it ment ending her own life. Soon enough she got to the brain, covered in the blood of the stallion as she smerks to the brain, turning around and giving it the best buck she could... which wasn't a lot but it was still plently enough to cause increadable amounts of pain.
17:40 Inky isn't sure what to do as GyroTech continues to writhe in pain. "Should I- Should I get help?" she asks, worried.
17:42 GyroTech howls a bit more, blood gushing from his nose and mouth. And then, suddenly, the unicorn gies still and quiet, his eyes closed, though he dies appear to still be breathing.
17:44 Liten keeps giving his brain buck after buck, cussing can be hear from inside the stallion's head "Ta dette din drittsekk! Dette vil lære deg å skubbe ponnier inn i deg!"
17:47 Inky pales as GyroTech goes still, pressing an ear to his chest to make sure he's still alive. She sighs as she hears he's still breathing, then starts as she hears Liten swearing. She can't tell exactly what she's saying, but just the tone of voice is enough. "L-Liten, stop! Whatever you're doing, you're hurting him!"
17:49 GyroTech seizures each time he's struck.
17:51 Liten doesn't listen to the mare, she was going to murder this stallion... to her mind, he earned every bit of it.
17:54 Inky wraps her legs around GyroTech to keep him from jerking around, tears forming in her eyes. "Liten, please..."
17:56 GyroTech 's breathing becomes labored as he begins to lose gis grup on life.
17:59 Liten stops to hear the crying of pony she loves... this makes her wonder why she would be crying over the loss of his life. She stops kicking him and slowly climbs out from the body of Gyro, emergining from his nose covered almost completely in his blood. She flies over and nuzzles against her cheek "Ikke gråt, Inkie ... Jeg liker det ikke når du gråter ..." She said in a very sad tone
18:12 Inky sniffs, holding GyroTech in her forelegs. "You, you almost killed him," she says, looking at the blood-covered breezie. "Why? Why would you do this, Liten?" Tears run down her face.
18:13 GyroTech continues to have labored breathing and bleeding heavily
18:13 Liten looks away with a big frown, wondering why Inky would be so mad at her "Han var alltid bety, ikke bare til meg, men til alle han møtte ... jeg trodde jeg ville gjøre alle en tjeneste og bare drepe ham."
18:43 Inky shakes her head, still crying. "No! He's a bit of a jerk but you shouldn't KILL him! Nopony deserves that!" She nuzzles his neck, wetting it with her tears. "And his heart's in the right place, too."
18:46 Liten nuzzles up against her as well, crying a bit at it "Hater du meg nå Inkie ... Har du aldri vil se meg igjen?" She said in a very worried tone... hopinh she would say no
18:59 Inky closes her eyes and takes a deep breath, letting it out slowly. She brushes Liten off her and shakes her head. "I don't know. I'm going to get help now; make sure /nothing happens/ to GyroTech while I'm gone." Inky stares at Liten, eyes red from crying. "When I come back, if..." she trails off, spreading her wings.
19:00 Liten watches her fly away, tears in her own face as she does so... she wouldn't be able to live with herself if Inky hated her... she was her best friend and love. She floated away, crying oh so loudly as she did, heading to their home.
19:05 Inky returns with paramedics, a little worried when she doesn't see Liten, but she pushes it out of her mind as she accompanies GyroTech back to the hospital. She sits at his side after they're done treating him, anxiously waiting for him to wake up.
19:06 Liten is at the home of Inky, cryin her eyes out onto her bed that the kind mare had so nicely given her. She was scared, so scared that she had messed everything up.
19:41 GyroTech stirred slightly in his sleep his eyes fluttering open for a sec as he let out a groan of pain.
19:42 Inky was fiddling with her hooves axiously, but looks up as she hears GyroTech groan. "Gyro?"
19:52 GyroTech shakes his head and looka over at the mare, but his face does not light up with recognition. "You're pretty cute, but what are you doing here?"
19:57 Inky starts to smile as GyroTech wakes up and moves around, but when he speaks, her heart catches in her throat. "W-what?" she chokes out, her eyes wide. "You don't remember me?"
20:01 GyroTech shakes his head and mustere up the most charming smile he can, a difficult feat wuth the cotton sticking out oh his nose. "No, but id like to get to know you. I'm....I"m..." Thw unicorn struggled to remember his name.
20:25 Inky lets out a strangled sob, her face going through rapidly shifting emotions. Finally she pushes everything else away, simply smiling at GyroTech with damp eyes. "You're GyroTech," she says, walking over and putting a hoof on his shoulder. "And I'm Inky. I'm... glad you're alright," she says.
20:30 GyroTech gives the mare a blank stare as even his own name doesn't bring any hint of recognition. "GyroTech...? Are you sure? I dont know if i like that name...and alright? What happened Inky?
20:35 Inky nods. "Yes, I'm sure." She sighs and looks away. "Well... you've suffered some /hopefully temporary/ brain trauma, that's apparently made you lose your memory..." She looks back with a wan smile, and grabs one of GyroTech's forehooves. "But it could have been a lot worse! We're- you're lucky."
20:43 GyroTech 's face turns from a confused look to a despondent frown. Brain trauma? Is that why everything is so fuzzy? The unicorn leans up and nuzzles her hoof. "Well I like tou Inky, Im glad you're here, even if i don't know you yet."
20:52 Inky smiles, a couple of tears escaping her eyes as she blinks. "Of course I'd be here for you, Gyro. And we can fix that second part. I'm sure you'll have just as much fun getting to know me the second time, too."
21:01 GyroTech frowned each time he heard his name, something about it just not sitting right with him. Why would his name sound so foriegn to him? Still he didn't say anything about it even if it was plastered accross his face. "I-I think I'd like that. You make me feel safe..." he sighs out, smiling up at her.
21:05 Inky sniffles. "Well, I do my best," she says, laughing weakly. The bat pony tilts her head, looking at GyroTech oddly as he frowns. "Is something bothering you? About your name? I suppose it is unfamiliar.."
21:16 GyroTech bites his lips and shakes his head. "That just cant be my name," he say in an agitated voice. "Id know my own name!" His initially calm dimeanor was becoming quite anxious and frustrated.
21:22 Inky 's ears droop and she sighs, realizing what's going on. "I can't even imagine how you must feel right now," she says, stroking his mane with a hoof. "Is there-- What CAN you remember?"
21:31 GyroTech furrows his brow as he tries to think on what he knows. "Well hmmI know that somepony important. I vaguly recall ordering servants around. I live in...in a large white city on a mountainside?"
21:32 Inky rolls her eyes and twists her mouth in a half grin. Of course /that'd/ be the stuff GyroTech remembered. "Yes, you grew up in Canterlot, as part of a noble family, I believe..."
21:39 GyroTech repeats the name slowly, "Canterlot." Yes the name did sound familiar in his mouth and her story made sense to him. "Where are my partents? Do they not care? I feel like they nay have been upset with me?"
21:41 Inky looks away. "Well.. I'm not too familiar with that part, but from what you told me, you weren't happy with what kind of pony they wanted you to be, and came here to get away from them. Pretending to be some sort of representative, or something."
04:12 GyroTech gives her a quizzical look. "What do you mean came here? Am I not just in a hospital in Canterlot? I am all alone amongst strange ponies I dont' know? Where am I?" He asks, his quiestings becoming increasingly more frantic.
04:19 Inky looks back, concerned as GyroTech gets more and more agitated. "No, you're in Seaddle! You're fine, you have lots of friends here; I can bring some of them to see you later, if you like!" She keeps stroking his mane, trying to calm him down.
04:22 GyroTech leans into the stroks, but his eyes are still quite wide. "B-but how can I have friends if I don't remember any of them? I know nopony here...I'm all alone...." Gyro's agitation culminates in a couple of sobs that soon turn into full blown crying.
04:29 Inky tries to hug GyroTech as best she can, though it's difficult since he's in a bed and she's not. "You're not alone! I'm sure your memory will come back soon, too!"
04:31 GyroTech burrys his muzzle into her fur and continues to cry. He reflexivly hugs her back, drawing her front half up into the bed with him.
04:33 Inky sniffles a bit herself, but tries to control herself, letting GyroTech cry into her fur.
04:37 GyroTech suddenly pulls away, still crying, but an accusatory look plastered on his face. "You never told me what happened."
04:44 Inky makes a funny expression, scratching her mane. "Umm, well... I'm not entirely sure, but I do know a few things. And I know they're gonna be a little hard to believe but bear with me, okay?" She leans onto the bed, grabbing GyroTech's hoof in both of hers. "So... firstly, there are these rare, tiny creatures called breezies..."
04:48 GyroTech frowns at her, tears still dampening his fur. "Breezies? What are those? Are they dangerous?"
04:53 Inky shakes her head. "They're little butterfly-pony creatures. I didn't think they were dangerous, but somehow this one, Liten, got stuck inside your nose, and somehow worked her way to your brain?" She twists her mouth. "All I know is that after you failed to sneeze her out, you started screaming in pain, and.. and then collapsed. And I got the breezie out and brought you here." Inky blinks back ...
04:53 Inky ... tears as she retells the story, leaning in to try to hug GyroTech again.
04:57 GyroTech burst into tears again and fell backwards. "You let this happen to me? Please tell me you squished that insect for me...Just go away...I don't want to see you anymore!" The unicorn shouts, his voice dripping with hurt rage.
05:04 Inky 's ears droop as GyroTech pulls away from her. "No! I-I tried to stop it!" She closes her eyes and grimaces, not sure where Liten is... or what she's going to say to her when she finds her. "Please, Gyro, I just want to help you," she says, tears runinning down her face.
05:07 GyroTech rolls over onto his belly and burries his head in his pillow, crying heavily. "Just go...I can't deal with this anymore. Why did this happen to me? And I'm not even where I belong..." the unicorn laments, distraught. His ears fold flat against his head and his tail is tucked under him.
05:09 Inky reluctantly pulls away. "Okay.. I'll go," she says, her voice wavering. "I'm sorry, GyroTech..." She turns and slowly walks away, stopping at the door for a long look back at the sobbing unicorn.
05:12 GyroTech doesn't even notice as Inky stops at the door, the unicorn just sobbing incoherently into his pillow, feeling all alone and isolated from the world.
05:20 Inky takes one last look and walks out, drying her tears. She didn't know how to help the unicorn anymore. She wasn't even sure bringing Naisol or any of his other friends around would help, since he wouldn't remember them either! The bat pony left the hospital, taking to the air. If Liten was at her house, well... well, she didn't exactly know what she was going to do. But the breezie wouldn't soon ...
05:20 Inky ... forget it.