Flowers By the Edge
One-Shot
17 August 2013
Stats
The RP has a total of 98 lines, 1535 words, and 8327 characters.The average line consists of 15.66 words that themselves average 4.42 characters taking about 1 minutes, 3 seconds.
Citizen said a total of 36 lines, 424 words, and 2330 characters.
Citizen's average line consists of 11.78 words that themselves average 4.5 characters taking about 1 minutes, 1 seconds.
Eden said a total of 27 lines, 273 words, and 1519 characters.
Eden's average line consists of 10.11 words that themselves average 4.56 characters taking about 1 minutes, 0 seconds.
Gyro Tech said a total of 35 lines, 838 words, and 4478 characters.
Gyro Tech's average line consists of 23.94 words that themselves average 4.34 characters taking about 1 minutes, 8 seconds.
10:00 GyroTech tugs on his big brother trying to get Citizen to take him into the Everfree forest to play with the pretty looking flowers.
10:01 Citizen sighs. "What is it now little bro?"
10:02 GyroTech give him puppy dog eyes. "Can we pwease go into the woods? I see some flowers that I want to pick for mom."
10:03 Eden watches the two from her hiding place among the bushes of the Everfree forest
10:04 Citizen sighs in frustration. "You know mom and dad said it's dangerous in there."
10:05 Citizen says "I really don't think it's a good idea
10:06 GyroTech whines "But that yellow blank flank in my class goes into there all the time."
10:07 Citizen "What did mom tell you about saying those words!?"
10:08 GyroTech rolls his eyes. "She told me not to call other ponies blank flanks, bitches, cu"
10:09 Citizen slaps GyroTech. "STOP!"
10:10 GyroTech begins to cry from the shock of the slap. "I'm gonna tell mom on you!" he says, tears in his eyes.
10:11 Citizen sighs. "Look...I'm sorry...but you cant go running around cussing like that ok? I'm sorry I hit you."
10:12 Eden snickers softly.
10:13 Citizen hugs his brother.
10:14 GyroTech leans into the hug, his tears beginning to dry up.
10:15 Citizen says "Listen...we'll go pick a FEW flowers on the edge and come back ok?"
10:16 GyroTech perks right up, the previous incident already forgotten. He bounds ahead of his brother towards the flowers and begins to -*- pick them, as some even prettier ones catch his attention deeper in the forest.
10:17 Citizen sighs and gallops after his brother, grabbing his tail as he starts wandering away from the edge. "Whoa whoa whoa. What did -*- I say?"
10:18 GyroTech sighs and steps back a bit. He looks around before feigning surprise and saying, "Hey isn't that the mare you are always -*- hanging out with? She's always so pretty." He bounds into the forest when Citizen looks away.
10:19 Citizen narrows his eyes. "I'm not falling for that trick again Bro. Not this time."
10:20 GyroTech doesnt give up though. "Hey miss...miss..." he struggles to remember her name, "Hey miss pretty pony, hows it going!" he -*- calls across the field.
10:21 Eden giggles. "Oh, pretty well my dear ~"
10:22 Citizen 's lip quivers as he tries to tell himself not to give in. And her name is Lonely Heart.
10:23 GyroTech is surprised to hear a response, but continues his act. "Thats her isnt it? That yellow pony with the green and blue mane?"
10:24 Citizen blinks and turns. "Lonely?"
10:25 GyroTech races off into the forest to pick more flowers.
10:26 Citizen turns back and growls, taking off after his brother. "COME BACK!!"
10:27 GyroTech notices that his brother is chasing after him. Despite being slower, he uses is small stature to duck between roots and -*- branches, trying to get away.
10:28 Eden silently follows them, grinning all the wider.
10:29 Citizen growls, running around them as best he could. "MOM'S GONNA BE SAD WHEN YOU GO AND GET YOURSELF HURT!! DO YOU REALLY WANT TO -*- FACE HER LIKE THAT!?"
10:30 GyroTech ducks into a briar patch with just a tiny entrance and continues going. Laughing all the while. "Your IT Citizen!" he calls.
10:31 Eden settles in near the end of the briar patch
10:32 GyroTech wanders out of the briar patch thoroughly lost. He no longer hears his brother near him and giggles to himself, searching -*- for some more pretty flowers.
10:33 Eden giggles softly herself, trotting out of the bushes.
10:34 Citizen stops at the briar patch. "YOU COME OUT OF THERE RIGHT NOW!!!" The colt screams at his brother.
10:35 GyroTech looks at Eden and smile. "Oh hi, do you want to play as well?"
10:36 Eden giggles. "Oh of course ~! What're we playing?
10:37 Citizen snorts and looks around for a way around the briar patch. "Gh...stupid brother...""
10:41 GyroTech grins up at the mare. "I'm trying to find pretty flowers for my mom."
10:42 Eden smiles. "Oh, I know where some very pretty flowers are ~"
10:43 Citizen growls as he just lights his horn and tries to hold the briars out of the way and push through.
10:44 GyroTech jumps up and down in excitement. "Oh you do? Please take me to them, please," the filly begs.
10:45 Eden giggles. "Alright, just close your eyes ~"
10:46 Citizen "Third!! OH THIRD!!" Citizen cries as he slowly pushes through the briars.
10:47 GyroTech hears his brothers calling, turns in that direction and shouts. "I'm over here! I found a nice mare to play with me!" He -*- then turns back to face the mare and smiles. He bites the tip of her tail and closes his eyes. "Okay, you can lead me now," he says, -*- mouth full of tail.
10:48 Eden giggles and starts leading him deeper into the forest.
10:49 Citizen "Just wait there!" Citizen yells. "AND STAY AWAY FROM HER! YOU KNOW WHAT MOM SAYS ABOUT STRANGERS!!!"
10:50 GyroTech ignores his brother's words and continues following the nice mare deeper into the woods. He hears a far off crash as his -*- brother finally pushes through the briar patch. Gyro was visible for an instant before disappearing into the darkness.
10:51 Eden giggles loudly, heading towards a cave.
10:52 Citizen gallops after him quickly as possible. "THIRD!!!" He screams.
10:53 GyroTech obediently follows the mare, wondering where they are going. He feels the ground turn to stone beneath his feet and asks, -*- "Why did we leave the forest?"
10:54 Eden smirks. "The flowers only grow in the dark."
10:55 Citizen looks around. "BRO!?"
10:57 GyroTech can no longer hear the cries of his older brother. He opens his eyes and looks around trying to see the flowers that grow -*- in the dark.
10:58 Eden is laying right in front of GyroTech, grinning almost evilly.
10:59 Citizen "THIRD!!!" Citizen roars in anger.
11:00 GyroTech notices that there are no flowers here. "Hey you meanie, you lied to me where are the flowers?" "CITIZEN!" he shouts, -*- "This meanie lied to me!"
11:01 Eden pounces on the colt, hir jaws stretching wide as she forces his head into her maw.
11:02 Citizen screams again, then hears his brother's voice echo out of the cave, and gallops into it. "BRO!!!"
11:03 GyroTech screams as Eden pounces on him his head sliding into her slimy jaws. He writhes in her grip, fighting with all hes got to -*- get away from the pony.
11:04 Eden easily grips the colt, hastily swallowing him down.
11:05 Citizen can be heard galloping down into the cave.
11:06 GyroTech continues to fight, but is no match for the full grown mare. Soon he feels her tongue on his belly, his head pressing into -*- her slick throat. The sound of her heartbeat echoing around him. He continues to protest loudly, but they come out as muffled -*- "Mmmfffss"
11:07 Eden wastes no time in stuffing the young pony into hir waiting gut.
11:08 Citizen gallops into view. "THIRD!"
11:09 GyroTech 's snout presses into Eden's stomach, a foul sour smell greeting his nose. Gyro cries turn into whimpers as he approaches -*- his final destination. His hooves wiggle in the air, them and his tail being the only things sticking out of her mouth.
11:10 Eden grins at Citizen as shi casually slurps up GyroTech' hooves and tail.
11:11 Citizen growls and tackles her. "YOU BITCH, LET HIM OUT!!!" The stallion roars as he starts to punch her in the face.
11:13 GyroTech slips out into Edens stomach, his small form only creating a small bulge in her belly. He hears his big brother and calls -*- out to him. "Brother Help, its gross in here!"
11:14 Eden winces at the first punch, then violently pulls the stallion off of hirself with magic.
11:15 Citizen gives a startles gasp as he's held out with magic, then lights his own horn in response and zaps her horn with his own magic.
11:16 GyroTech begins to cry as the burst of activity throws him about, causing him to slosh around in hir stomach
11:17 Eden groans, trying to hold his attack back. "If you don't... Stop... You won't see your little colt again..."
11:18 Citizen asks "What do you mean?""
11:19 GyroTech cries even harder, the stomach walls gripping him tightly.
11:20 Eden giggles. "I'll just let all the air out of my stomach... He'll have maybe a minute."
11:21 Citizen "No! Don't!"
11:22 Eden grins. "Why shouldn't I?"
11:23 GyroTech sobs to himself, though he is sure big brother is going to make it all better.
11:25 Citizen begs "Please...I love him. He's my little brother. We just wanna go home. Just let him go." The stallion begs.
11:25 Eden chides "D'aww, you love him? Why don't you go get him then~?"
11:26 GyroTech says, "Yes please come get my Citizen, I don't want to be here any longer"
11:27 Citizen shouts "Get him? You'll just EAT ME TOO! I'm not stupid!"
11:29 Eden rolls her eyes. "Oh well, guess it's not your day to save him then~"
11:30 GyroTech cries. "You arent going to get me Citi? Why don't you love me!?"
11:31 Citizen says "But if I go after him we'll both just die!"
11:32 Eden snorts. "Oh come on now, I don't just kill my prey... then I'd run out of food!"
11:33 Citizen asks "Then what?"
11:34 GyroTech says "Citi I'm going to tell mom on you if you don't come get me right now!" not quite thinking through his words, due to -*- his frightened state.
11:35 Eden giggles. "Come on now, sounds like he's getting impatient~"
11:36 Citizen sighs. "Promise you wont hurt us?"
11:37 GyroTech continues to cry, waiting to be rescued.
11:38 Eden nods, rubbing the small bulge in hir middle.
11:39 Citizen sighs. "Fine." He grumbles.
11:40 GyroTech feels Eden push against him through her belly and squirms around at the touch.
11:41 Eden grins and opens hir mouth wide.
11:42 Citizen sighs and presses his muzzle and fore hooves into her maw, whimpering softly
11:43 GyroTech feels Citizen press up against him through the stomach walls and feels Eden's body start to accept him in.